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gr-sim/tfv/README.references

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ characters.  I'm mostly leaving that stuff out but believe me it was there.
 
 Mirror Lake
 	Might look mysteriously like Yosemite.
-	Had a friend who was a Tolkein nut.
+	Had a friend who was a Tolkien nut.
 
 U of M / College Park
 	Where I went to college
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ Talbot Hall
 	liberated from a construction site at some point.
 
 	Pete there is mildly famous these days.  He's playing
-	the super nintendo, probably Super Metroid.
+	the super Nintendo, probably Super Metroid.
 	Pete was the initial instigator of all of this.  As he was not
 	an engineer he had time to play video games and we'd waste time
 	watching instead of doing work.  He played FF7 and we'd do
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ South Campus Dining Hall
 	Elaine is a good friend and fellow Electrical Engineer.
 	It was entirely her fault I ended up in Talbot Hall with this group.
 
-	Cafeteria Lady was there every day.  You really did get a gree
+	Cafeteria Lady was there every day.  You really did get a free
 	cupcake coupon on your birthday.
 
 Killer Crabs
@@ -111,8 +111,9 @@ Metro Station
 
 
 Bel Air
-	over-developed and annoying county seat of the county where
-	I grew up.  I went to high school there, but I actually lived
+	Not the one in California.  The over-developed and annoying
+	county seat of the county where I grew up.
+	I went to high school there, but I actually lived
 	in the stereotypically more unsavory "route 40 corridor"
 
 Minigolf
@@ -124,7 +125,7 @@ Minigolf
 CMW High School
 	Another high school in Bel Air.  Their Academic quiz team always
 	mysteriously wore black trenchcoats (technically it turns out
-	they were German surprlus coats?)  The mystery of this was
+	they were German surplus coats?)  The mystery of this was
 	never really resolved, even when coincidentally two of the
 	team members ended up being roommates in college.
 
@@ -164,7 +165,7 @@ Video Homeroom
 	all hang out.  Ford's handle was misspelled "Ford Perfect" from HGTTG
 	and Raistlin's was from some book, he changed his somewhat often.
 
-	The library was indeed run by a scary nun, but I'm exagerating
+	The library was indeed run by a scary nun, but I'm exaggerating
 	here as the school was full of scary nuns and this particular one
 	barely would make the scary top 5.
 
@@ -228,7 +229,8 @@ Susie the Guinea Pig
 	California and back by car, as well as to Canada at least twice.
 
 
-Things I am leaving out.
+Other interesting things that I can't figure out how to fit into the game.
+
 	Freshman Steve / Freshman Jenny -- people with duplicate names
 		we'd assign names based on class rank, which would
 		then follow them even as their class changed.
@@ -236,3 +238,12 @@ Things I am leaving out.
 	'66 Mustang / Chevette / Topaz -- we drove an odd assortment
 		of cars which had their own adventures, but not really
 		possible to fit them into the story.
+
+	Language Lab: another place of horror, stuck one "mod"
+		(our school had a 16-mod modular schedule) a week
+		listening to foreign language tapes.  Run by
+		one of the scary nuns.
+		During the senior variety show skit, which took place
+		on the enterprise, my brief part was to report the
+		destruction of the language lab before dying
+		(I was wearing a red shirt of course).

gr-sim/tfv/TODO

@@ -31,7 +31,3 @@ Not soon:
 + Allow spaceship to land on arbitrary grass space
 + Toggle lowercase/uppercase text
 
-
-trailer:
-	+ Have JC part after mention darkest Bel Air
-	+ Play GROAN sounds for TALBOT / FANTASY / 7