peasant: work on hoking up hidden glen

games/peasant/text/inside.inc

@@ -12,52 +12,85 @@
 .byte "the archer stops arching and turns to you. ",34,"My brother told you to tell me haldo? He must want to start the old business back up!",34,0
 
 ; + haldo (before talking to Mendelev)
-.byte "What'd you read that in PQ Stragedy Guide? Go talk to my brother first.",0
+.byte "What'd you read that in",13
+.byte "the PQ Stragedy Guide? Go",13
+.byte "talk to my brother first.",0
 
 ; + haldo (after Dongolev leaves)
-.byte 34,"Haldo?",34,". you call out... ",34,"Hadloooooo",34,0
+.byte 34,"Haldo?",34,". you call out...",13
+.byte 34,"Hadloooooo",34,0
 
 ; + look (with Dongolev)
-.byte "Well, looky here! A hidden glen! You LOVE hidden glens. This one has some kinda archer in it.",0
+.byte "Well, looky here! A hidden",13
+.byte "glen! You LOVE hidden",13
+.byte "glens. This one has some",13
+.byte "kinda archer in it.",0
 
 ; + look (w/o Dongolev)
-.byte "You're in a hidden glen. There's a tree with zillions of arrows in it.",0
+.byte "You're in a hidden glen.",13
+.byte "There's a tree with",13
+.byte "zillions of arrows in it.",0
  
-; + look archer
-.byte "He sure looks miffed at that tree. He's emptied 5 good quivers' worth into that poor thing.",0
+; + look archer )when there)
+.byte "He sure looks miffed at",13
+.byte "that tree. He's emptied 5",13
+.byte "good quivers' worth into",13
+.byte "that poor thing.",0
 
-; + look arrow
-.byte "Somebody call a tree doctor. Them puppies are stuck in there like a, um, er ... stuck pig.",0
+; + look arrow (before taken)
+.byte "Somebody call a tree",13
+.byte "doctor. Them puppies are",13
+.byte "stuck in there like a, um,",13
+.byte "er ... stuck pig.",0
 
 ; + look bushes
-.byte "There's some thick 'ol bushes up in this hidden glen.",0
+.byte "There's some thick 'ol",13
+.byte "bushes up in this hidden",13
+.byte "glen.",0
 
 ; + look fence
-.byte "Wow! There's a hole in it on THIS side too!",0
+.byte "Wow! There's a hole in it",13
+.byte "on THIS side too!",0
 
 ; + look tree
-.byte "Dude, and then the elf, like, totally climbed up it. It was awesome!",0
+.byte "Dude, and then the elf,",13
+.byte "like, totally climbed up",13
+.byte "it. It was awesome!",0
 
 ; + climb tree
-.byte "Naw, you'd probably figure out some way to kill yourself doing that.",0
+.byte "Naw, you'd probably figure",13
+.byte "out some way to kill",13
+.byte "yourself doing that.",0
 
 ; + climb/jump fence
-.byte "Not going to dignify that with a response.",0
+.byte "Not going to dignify that",13
+.byte "with a response.",0
 
 ; + 2 points
 ; + get arrow
 .byte "You pick out a really good one and yank it from the tree. Hooray! Now you have an arrow!",0
 
 ; + get arrow (Dogolev there) (Warning: As you can see, this kills you.)
-.byte "Something tells me now's not a good time.",0
+.byte "Something tells me now's",13
+.byte "not a good time.",0
 ; {you get the arrow anyway and Dongolev shoots you}
-.byte "It wasn't a good time. Hey, my mom's making peasant-kabobs for dinner TOO! Right. Anyway. You dead. Thanks for playing, and try not to die.",0
+; graphically, your head gets stuck to tree
+.byte "It wasn't a good time. Hey,",13
+.byte "my mom's making",13
+.byte "peasant-kabobs for dinner",13
+.byte "TOO!",0
+
+.byte "Right. Anyway. You dead.",13
+.byte "Thanks for playing, and try",13
+.byte "not to die.",0
 
 ; + get arrow (After you get the arrow OR get arrow from after Kerrek)
 .byte "You're pretty much all set on the arrow front. They're kinda cool, though.",0
 
 ; + get arrow (after killing Kerrek)
-.byte "You grab yet another arrow from the tree hoping to get some bonus points.",0
+.byte "You grab yet another arrow",13
+.byte "from the tree hoping to get",13
+.byte "some bonus points.",0
 
 
 ;==========================

games/peasant/text/peasant1.inc

@@ -15,7 +15,8 @@ gary_look_fence_message:
 .byte "as toothpicks.",0
 
 ; + look fence (after scaring him)
-.byte "It's got a big ol' hole in it. For walking through.",0
+.byte "It's got a big ol' hole in",13
+.byte "it. For walking through.",0
 
 ; + look flies (before scaring him)
 gary_look_flies_message:
@@ -37,13 +38,22 @@ gary_look_stump_message:
 .byte "at the stump.",0
 
 ; +2 POINTS
-; + wear mask
-.byte "You slip on the hideous monster maskus.",0
-.byte "You scared the crap outta Poor Gary! He broke on through to the other side!",0
+; + wear mask / scare horse
+.byte "You slip on the hideous",13
+.byte "monster maskus.",0
+
+; TODO: mask on face, gary turns and runs through fence
+
+.byte "You scared the crap outta",13
+.byte "Poor Gary! He broke on",13
+.byte "through to the other side!",0
 
 ; + wear mask (after scaring him)
 ; + kick/kill/punch poor gary (after scaring)
-.byte "Gary's gone now. Let go. Just let go./Let go!",0
+.byte "Gary's gone now. Let go.",13
+.byte "Just let go.",0
+
+.byte "Let go!",0
 
 ; + break/kick stump / sit on stump
 gary_kick_stump_message:
@@ -122,7 +132,9 @@ gary_climb_fence_message:
 .byte "Peasantry.",0
 
 ; + climb/jump fence after scaring)
-.byte "More like you should walk through that gaping hole in it. Just an idea.",0
+.byte "More like you should walk",13
+.byte "through that gaping hole in",13
+.byte "it. Just an idea.",0
 
 ; + get flies (before scaring him)
 gary_get_flies_message:
@@ -183,7 +195,8 @@ well_look_at_crank_message:
 .byte "It looks rusted in place.",0
 
 ; + look crank (after putting pebbles in the bucket)
-.byte "That is a bonafide crank. It seems to work now.",0
+.byte "That is a bonafide crank.",13
+.byte "It seems to work now.",0
 
 ; + look in well (after mask)
 well_look_in_well_message2:
@@ -211,7 +224,11 @@ well_look_at_bucket_message:
 
 ; +2 POINTS
 ; + put pebbles in bucket
-.byte "You plunk all your pebbles into the bucket. The weight causes it to descend to the bottom of the well with a quickness!",0
+.byte "You plunk all your pebbles",13
+.byte "into the bucket. The weight",13
+.byte "causes it to descend to the",13
+.byte "bottom of the well with a",13
+.byte "quickness!",0
 
 ; + turn crank (before pebbles, far away)
 .byte "You can't reach from there.",0
@@ -222,18 +239,38 @@ well_turn_crank_message:
 .byte "there was something heavy",13
 .byte "in that bucket...",0
 
+; TODO: animation, bucket up with mask
 ; + turn crank (pebbles)
-.byte "The crank seems to have loosened and you haul the bucket back up. What's this? Why there's a monster maskus in there! No doubt leftover from some pagan ritual. Silly pagans.",0
-.byte "You grab up the scary moster maskus. Man, this thing could scare a horse!",0
+.byte "The crank seems to have",13
+.byte "loosened and you haul the ",13
+.byte "bucket back up. What's",13
+.byte "this? Why there's a monster",13
+.byte "maskus in there! No doubt",13
+.byte "leftover from some pagan",13
+.byte "ritual. Silly pagans.",0
 
+.byte "You grab up the scary",13
+.byte "moster maskus. Man, this",13
+.byte "thing could scare a horse!",0
+
+; like edge of screen far
 ; + turn crank (after mask, far away)
-.byte "You got a short reach to match your short pants. Try standing closer to that crank.",0
+.byte "You got a short reach to",13
+.byte "match your short pants. Try",13
+.byte "standing closer to that",13
+.byte "crank.",0
 
 ; + turn crank (after mask, close, first time)
-.byte "Down she goes! You could do this all day!",0
+.byte "Down she goes! You could",13
+.byte "do this all day!",0
 
 ; + turn crank (after mask, close, second time)
-.byte "The drama grips you, but the bucket is empty. On the bright side, you're getting a pretty sweet workout for your Deltoidus Rex muscles.",0
+.byte "The drama grips you, but",13
+.byte "the bucket is empty. On the",13
+.byte "bright side, you're",13
+.byte "getting a pretty sweet",13
+.byte "workout for your Deltoidus",13
+.byte "Rex muscles.",0
  
 ; + 2 POINTS
 ; + turn crank (baby)
@@ -306,7 +343,9 @@ well_put_anything_message:
 .byte "Find some pebbles first and you might have the makings of a good idea. About time.",0
 
 ; + put pebbles/rocks in bucket (after mask)
-.byte "We've already been through this exercise and it went pretty well, ya?",0
+.byte "We've already been through",13
+.byte "this exercise and it went",13
+.byte "pretty well, ya?",0
 
 ; + put pebbles/rocks in well (you have them)
 .byte "Then it'd be tough to get them back. You never go ANYWHERE without your rocks",0

games/peasant/text/peasant3.inc

@@ -255,7 +255,10 @@ lake_west_skip_stones_message:
 
 ; TODO
 ; + get pebbles/rocks (from too far)
-.byte "You do your best Mr. Fantastic impression, but you can't reach from here.",0
+.byte "You do your best Mr.",13
+.byte "Fantastic impression,",13
+.byte "but you can't reach from",13
+.byte "here.",0
 
 ; TODO
 ; +5 POINTS