mist: ending: center text and update wording slightly

mist/TODO

@@ -6,12 +6,15 @@ For release 1.0
 
 + MIST
 	-- open door to clock puzzle?
-	-- only allow entering ship if it's up
 	-- another stop on path to spaceship.  Out of room though :(
 	-- MIST_ROCKET_PATH_PAD probably missing ship-raised background
 
 + OCTAGON
 	-- load "red page" sound into LC and play it?
+	-- show "burnt" books if click on non-avail book
+	-- adjust grabbing of actual books
+	-- longer speeches from brothers, most notably the
+		page 5 speeches and ending
 
 + SELENA
 	-- load 1s clip of sounds (4k each) into language card?
@@ -25,6 +28,7 @@ For release 1.0
 
 + ARBOR
 	-- rotate windmill if enabled?
+	-- missing treehouses
 
 + NIBEL
 	-- turn on sprite crop in the viewer part
@@ -33,10 +37,7 @@ For release 1.0
 + MECHE
 	-- animations for elevator
 	-- way to turn around in basement
-	-- ability to look up at top of elevator
-	-- look around in the secret rooms
-		-- note from achenar
-
+	-- more of paths to hints
 
 + SUB
 	-- can walk around outside of sub
@@ -53,12 +54,11 @@ Done:
 TODO Maybe future:
 
 MIST:
-+ some sort of switch animation on circuit breakers?
 + look at catherine's letter from other side of path
 + Make clock puzzle more similar to actual game
 
 OCTAGON:
-+ in tower could have extra window open/closed far backgrounds
++ in tower could have extra window open/closed far backgrounds(?)
 + turning when looking at hint loses the text mode
 + line drawing on map isn't optimal
 + should hints be black on white text?
@@ -80,15 +80,11 @@ SELENA age:
 	maybe not bother with aiming antennas, but sum button plays
 	if switch been pushed
 	filler sounds for others?
-+ That whole rediculous underground sub sequence
-+ light switch in tunnel
 + antenna compartment should open/close when you click on it
 + better colors
 
 Channelwood:
 + Windmill animation
-+ Switch flip animation
-+ Open faucet animation
 + Animation for bridge rising
 + Animation for pipe extending
 + Animation for book elevator

mist/default_save.s

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 .include "common_defines.inc"
 
 
-.if 0
+.if 1
 ; if doing playthrough
 .include "playthrough_save.inc"
 .endif
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
 .byte STONEY_ARRIVAL	; LOCATION	=	$82
 .endif
 
-.if 1
+.if 0
 ; NIBEL
 .byte LOAD_NIBEL	; WHICH_LOAD		= 	$80
 .byte DIRECTION_E	; DIRECTION		= 	$81
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@
 .endif
 
 
-.if 1
+.if 0
 .byte $00	; RED_PAGES_TAKEN	=	$83
 .byte $00	; BLUE_PAGES_TAKEN	=	$84
 .byte $00	; CLOCK_BRIDGE		=	$85

mist/dni_ending.s

@@ -300,20 +300,23 @@ atrus_sprite_book_down:	; at 15,6
 ;
 ; ending, both
 ;
+
+           ;          1         2         3
+           ;0123456789012345678901234567890123456789
 atrus_text_both:
-.byte 0,20,"AH, MY FRIEND.  YOU'VE RETURNED.",0
-.byte 0,21,"WE MEET FACE-TO-FACE.",0
-.byte 0,22,"AND THE PAGE, DID YOU BRING THE PAGE?",0
+.byte 5,20,"AH, MY FRIEND.  YOU'VE RETURNED.",0
+.byte 10,21,"WE MEET FACE-TO-FACE.",0
+.byte 2,22,"AND THE PAGE, DID YOU BRING THE PAGE?",0
 .byte 0,23," ",0
 
 ; ending, no white page
 ;
 
 atrus_text_nopage1:
-.byte 0,20,"YOU DIDN'T BRING THE PAGE.",0
-.byte 0,21,"YOU DIDN'T BRING THE PAGE!",0
-.byte 0,22,"WHAT KIND OF FOOL ARE YOU?!",0
-.byte 0,23,"DID YOU NOT TAKE MY WARNING SERIOUSLY?",0
+.byte 7,20,"YOU DIDN'T BRING THE PAGE.",0
+.byte 7,21,"YOU DIDN'T BRING THE PAGE!",0
+.byte 7,22,"WHAT KIND OF FOOL ARE YOU?!",0
+.byte 1,23,"DID YOU NOT TAKE MY WARNING SERIOUSLY?",0
 
 atrus_text_nopage2:
 .byte 17,20,"*SIGH*",0

mist/leveldata_octagon.inc

@@ -632,8 +632,8 @@ location33:
 	.word	$0000			; west bg
 	.byte	BG_NORTH
 	.byte	DIRECTION_N	; special exit
-	.byte	6,34		; special x
-	.byte	5,35		; special y
+	.byte	2,37		; special x
+	.byte	5,40		; special y
 	.word	turn_page-1	; special function
 
 ; OCTAGON_IN_FIREPLACE_CLOSED		-- in fireplace, closed

mist/octagon_fireplace.s

@@ -442,29 +442,33 @@ no_speedup:
 	;             1         2         3
 	;   0123456789012345678901234567890123456789
 atrus_green_book1:
-.byte 0,20,"WHO THE DEVIL ARE YOU?",0
-.byte 0,21,"D--DON'T COME HERE TO D'NI, NOT YET.",0
+.byte 9,20,"WHO THE DEVIL ARE YOU?",0
+.byte 2,21,"D--DON'T COME HERE TO D'NI, NOT YET.",0
 .byte 0,22,"I HAVE MANY QUESTIONS FOR YOU, MY FRIEND",0
-.byte 0,23,"AS YOU, NO DOUBT, HAVE FOR ME.",0
+.byte 6,23,"AS YOU, NO DOUBT, HAVE FOR ME.",0
 
 atrus_green_book2:
-.byte 0,20,"PERHAPS MY STORY IS IN ORDER. I AM ATRUS",0
-.byte 0,21,"I FEAR YOU HAVE MET MY SONS,",0
-.byte 0,22,"SIRRUS & ACHENAR, TRAPPED IN MY LIBRARY",0
-.byte 0,23,"ON MYST ISLAND",0
+.byte 6,20,"PERHAPS MY STORY IS IN ORDER.",0
+.byte 0,21,"I AM ATRUS; I FEAR YOU HAVE MET MY SONS,",0
+.byte 11,22,"SIRRUS & ACHENAR,",0
+.byte 2,23,"TRAPPED IN MY LIBRARY ON MYST ISLAND.",0
 
+	;             1         2         3
+	;   0123456789012345678901234567890123456789
 atrus_green_book3:
-.byte 0,20,"IT CONTAINS MY WRITINGS, MY BOOKS",0
-.byte 0,21,"THAT LINK TO FANTASTIC PLACES, AN ART",0
-.byte 0,22,"I LEARNED FROM MY FATHER YEARS AGO.",0
-.byte 0,23," ",0
+.byte 4,20,"THAT LIBRARY CONTAINS MY WRITINGS,",0
+.byte 0,21,"MY BOOKS THAT LINK TO FANTASTIC PLACES,",0
+.byte 4,22,"AN ART I LEARNED FROM MY FATHER",0
+.byte 15,23,"YEARS AGO.",0
 
 atrus_green_book4:
-.byte 0,20,"THE RED & BLUE BOOKS ARE DIFFERENT",0
-.byte 0,21,"I WROTE THOSE TO ENTRAP OVER-GREEDY",0
-.byte 0,22,"EXPLORERS THAT MIGHT STUMBLE UPON MYST",0
-.byte 0,23,"I HAD NO IDEA I'D ENTRAP MY OWN SONS",0
+.byte 3,20,"THE RED & BLUE BOOKS ARE DIFFERENT",0
+.byte 3,21,"I WROTE THOSE TO ENTRAP OVER-GREEDY",0
+.byte 1,22,"EXPLORERS THAT MIGHT STUMBLE UPON MYST",0
+.byte 2,23,"I HAD NO IDEA I'D ENTRAP MY OWN SONS",0
 
+	;             1         2         3
+	;   0123456789012345678901234567890123456789
 atrus_green_book5:
 .byte 0,20,"I HAD NO IDEA THE EXTENT OF THEIR GREED",0
 .byte 0,21,"THEY USED THEIR OWN MOTHER, MY CATHERINE",0
@@ -474,13 +478,16 @@ atrus_green_book5:
 atrus_green_book6:
 .byte 0,20,"YOU, MY FRIEND, CAN BRING THE PAGE TO ME",0
 .byte 0,21,"I PRAY YOU BELIEVE MY STORY AND NOT THE",0
-.byte 0,22,"LIES MY SONS HAVE TOLD. BRING THE PAGE",0
-.byte 0,23,"AND BRING JUSTICE TO MY SONS. HURRY.",0
+.byte 1,22,"LIES MY SONS HAVE TOLD. BRING THE PAGE",0
+.byte 2,23,"AND BRING JUSTICE TO MY SONS. HURRY.",0
+
+	;             1         2         3
+	;   0123456789012345678901234567890123456789
 
 ; book, 2nd time
 atrus_green_book9:
-.byte 0,20,"HAVE YOU FOUND THE MISSING PAGE?",0
-.byte 0,21,"OH, COME, COME.  COME ON THEN.",0
+.byte 4,20,"HAVE YOU FOUND THE MISSING PAGE?",0
+.byte 5,21,"OH, COME, COME.  COME ON THEN.",0
 .byte 0,22," ",0
 .byte 0,23," ",0